05/22/2008

A bad pitch that just can't wait

I know I promised my thoughts on the Jim Beam campaign and a few tips on what NOT to do, but yesterday Erika Jurney from Plain Jane Mom forwarded me a bad pitch that just can't wait.

Erika's analysis of this effort is better than anything I could do, so I will leave you with it, wish my US readers a happy holiday and promise to get the other stuff up over the weekend.


(clarification -- this is a bad pitch, but it did have a conclusion, I just screen-grabbed the first few graphs)

Tags: ,

Posted @ 3:05PM in Blogger relations

Comments

This is so bad and badly written that I wonder if it's not a phishing scam.

Spooky.

Posted by adrienne | May 22, 2008 7:58:11 PM

I hate to say it, but there was a name, real address and real (vs masked) URL to sign up associated with this pitch. I just black that stuff out because it's not about embarassing folks, it's about helping people do it better.

If it is phishing, ie some fake site trying to get us to give up our personal details to participate in their lame beta, they'd do well to do a little spell check.

Because the way this looks, English is their 7th language.

Posted by Susan Getgood | May 22, 2008 8:07:43 PM

omg - did they text this pitch?

Posted by Kevin Dugan | May 23, 2008 8:57:48 PM

Maybe this pitch should stay in Beta a while longer...just sayin'

Posted by Kami Huyse | May 24, 2008 1:39:17 AM

The comments to this entry are closed.

About Susan


    Marketing Roadmaps is no longer updated here. Find it at getgood.com/roadmaps

      Hire Me!

        GetGood Strategic Marketing


        www.flickr.com
        This is a Flickr badge showing public photos from sgetgood. Make your own badge here.

        Susan Getgood's Facebook profile

 Subscribe

Subscribe by Email

Recent Posts

Top Posts

Recent Comments

Google Search

Archives